So, like I said a week or so ago, this is probably my most favorite thing I have ever done in relevance to editing.

Like title says, this is page 5 and the editing may look a little confusing so here's mostly the key: The little notes inbetween the paragraphs have arrows to where they belong, then right before "Kyle" goes 1 (chunk of written text in the lower left corner), 2 (chunk of written text at top), and 3 (chunk of written text in the middle-ish lower portion). The stuff that's crossed out on the right that's bigger than everything else is just reminder ideas.

Yeah.

I love it.

2D in the corner belongs to whoever draws the Gorillaz and the style is 's. I used without asking; sorry. I didn't actually think I could draw like that. Stan and Kyle belong to Trey Parker and Matt Stone. Story itself is mine.